Writing Task 1: Writing an Email

Read the following information.

Recently you visited the Zoological park and had an uncanny experience, as a man died by falling in the tiger’s enclosure. You were not able to do anything at that point but wanted to show your concern for the safety of the visitors.

Write an email to the Director of the Zoological Park in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things:

  • Give a description of the incident
  • Complain about the short fencing
  • Show your concern for the safety of the visitors

Hello, My name is Thomas. I recently visited the zoological park for the first time, and my experience on my visit was so unpleasant. I witnessed a man standing next to me fall into the tiger's enclosure. I tried to hold him, but this happened incredibly. I felt unfortunate when help could not come on time, which resulted in his death. The temporary fencing of the park attributed to this event. Zoological parks with wild animals are supposed to have a tall barricade. This will prevent the animals from coming out or even visitors from falling. Humans tend to feel endangered after this situation. Some visitors who were present on the day of this event might feel psychologically stressed. In addition, visitors who are visiting for the first time are not aware of the park's structure. This poses safety concerns and even death, as I experienced the last time, especially for children. It will be an excellent idea for the park to focus more on the safety of visitors. Regards Thomas