Writing Task 1: Writing an Email

Read the following information.

Recently you visited the Zoological park and had an uncanny experience, as a man died by falling in the tiger’s enclosure. You were not able to do anything at that point but wanted to show your concern for the safety of the visitors.

Write an email to the Director of the Zoological Park in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things:

  • Give a description of the incident
  • Complain about the short fencing
  • Show your concern for the safety of the visitors

Dear Sir, I'm writing this email regarding my recent visit to your park on Saturday, We were walking in the zoo when we suddenly heard a loud voice and, We saw people running towards the tiger's cage, so we ran in the same direction. There we saw a man that fell into the cage, and the tiger's paws were on the man's chest. The people tried to help him, but everyone was too scared to go close. The man was already unconscious to help himself. I remember that someone called security. They managed to get the man from the cage, and they took him to the hospital quickly. Later, I heard in the news that the man died because of enormous blood loss. I appreciate all the hard work you do to maintain the park. However, I saw a few loopholes in the security of the park. Firstly, the short fence near the cages of wild animals. Secondly, the security crew should be present in each park section. I would like you to look into these problems immediately to avoid future occurrences. Regards, Nikki