Writing Task 2: Responding to Survey Questions

Read the following information.

Government is worried because of Discipline and respect in schools being replaced with harassment and violence, directed at teachers. Government has sent out an opinion survey to know about the possible ways to control the situation.

Public opinion survey:

Option A: Special training for the teachers: Special training sessions should be arranged for the school teachers.
Option B: Introduction of the new curriculum: New curriculum with yoga and meditation classes should be introduced.

To whom may it concern, I believe the government should implement the new curriculum with yoga and meditation classes, and it should be compulsory for both students and teachers. Yoga and meditation provide benefits in numerous ways to the students and tutors. I am enlightening some rationale in this survey that would strengthen my choice. Firstly students and teachers are likely to have stress due to the study burden and syllabus length. This stress leads to harassment and violence in school. Hence, the introduction of the classes like yoga and meditation provide: -Certain benefits, like relieving stress and anxiety. -Increasing focus. -Enhancing self-awareness in students and teachers. Secondly, they can improve their physical strength, flexibility, and immune systems by doing yoga at schools. Additionally, tutees and instructors make themselves self-discipline person by doing yoga and meditation. As per my perception, yoga and mediation classes at school would be more appealing than giving special training to the teachers because discipline and respect can not be achieved by special training. It can only achieve by self-awareness. Yoga and meditation are essential for self-awareness. Thank you! Felix

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