Writing Task 2: Responding to Survey Questions
Read the following information.
Parents should or should not encourage their kids for competition. A Child welfare society has sent out an opinion survey to know the views of the parents.
Option A: Competition leads to progress.
Is Competition good or bad::
Option B: Competition harbours hostility and aggression.
To whom it may concern. I think parents should encourage their kids for competition in this competitive era as it is suitable for their future growth and development. There is no denying that hard competition sometimes leads to aggression and disturb the peace of mind. To embark with, firstly, the spirit of competition drives the passion for something in their mind. If there is competition in any field, it will definitely insist on more work to win the competition. For instance, there is a hockey sports match between the two teams. So if there is any reward for the winning team, it will build the competitive spirit in teams that eventually help learn and grow more. Moreover, if there is a lack of competition or no competition, no one really thinks to be better or creative. Hence, healthy competition in kids motivates the kids to think out of the shell and sharp their skills which may they already have. For an illustration, nowadays there is hard competition in the universities to get admission in good courses like doctors, engineers. So, kids do great hard work in the school to get admissions that further brighten their future. Thus, competition gives more motivation yo achieve better goals. To encapsulate, I would like to say thank you for allowing me to express my views, but again it's my personal perspective, but I will support whatever the decision taken by the welfare society Regards Tony.