Writing Task 2: Responding to Survey Questions

Read the following information.

Your university is conducting survey to know how many work hours should be permitted to students in a week time. The University has sent out an opinion survey to see what students think about it.

Weekly working hours for Students :

Option A: Less than 15 hours per week in a single job.
Option B: More than 20 hours per week with all multiple jobs hours added.

To whom it may concern, In response to the survey, I choose Option: A, where students are allowed 15 hours per week in a single job. Although Option: B might look attractive to some students, they can earn extra bucks, but Option A would be more beneficial for everyone. The first reason is, students, need time to study if students are allowed to work more than 20 hours per week, it will hamper their studies which in turn will impact their future as they would spend more time in the part-time job rather than putting more efforts in their field of study. Another reason is, students are already overloaded with the syllabus. Every month, they have to give a test, and if they start working more, it will impact their physical and mental health. Many students all over the worked who commit suicide because of failure, and I firmly believe if students get the flexibility to work more, they perhaps opt for it, which would not be suitable for the grades. I appreciate this opportunity to provide my opinion on the topic. Kind Regards Mark

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