Writing Task 2: Responding to Survey Questions

Read the following information.

A local newspaper is conducting a survey to know whether their paper should have more news or more discounts and offers

Local News Paper Survey:

Option A: Your newspaper should have more Local and International news, then discount coupons, etc.
Option B: You think you can access news online but you need more of Discount coupons and offers section.

To Whom it may concern. As you know, your valuable newspaper became non-readable, and so expensive recently. So, I want to take this opportunity to thank the management's initiative to send us this vital survey to consider our opinion to increase the newspaper's reader. And as far as I'm concerned, reducing your newspaper's price and adding more local and international news will be an effective option for the following reasons. First of all, we are currently in a terrible financial situation. Due to this crisis, people nowadays prefer to purchase their essential products like sugar and rice, rather than purchasing an expensive and non-affordable newspaper.so I advise you to apply more discounts and more coupons to encourage people to purchase your newspaper. Secondly, people are bored reading the same news every day, so adding more exciting news articles locally and internationally will gather more new readers who will start reading different news topics. Based on the above considerations, I recommend adding new local and international news articles and applying more discounts and coupons rather than cancel the paper edition and keep the discounted online version. It is my personnel opinion. But, as the saying goes, 'half a loaf is better than no bread', So, I'll support whatever the decision is made. Thank you. Regards Thomas

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