Writing Task 1: Writing an Email

Read the following information.

Recently you visited the Zoological park and had an uncanny experience, as a man died by falling in the tiger’s enclosure. You were not able to do anything at that point but wanted to show your concern for the safety of the visitors.

Write an email to the Director of the Zoological Park in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things:

Give a description of the incident
Complain about the short fencing
Show your concern for the safety of the visitors

Sample Answer

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this email regarding my recent visit to your park on last Sunday. On Sunday, when we were roaming around the park, we heard that someone was screaming badly. We saw that everyone was running towards the tiger's cage, so we ran in the same direction. There, we noticed that accidentally, a man was fell in the cage, and the tiger paws were on the man's chest. The people were trying to help him, but everyone was too scared to go close. The man was already unconscious to help himself. I remember that someone called security. They managed to get the man from the cage and sent him to the hospital quickly. Later, I heard in the news that the man died because of the enormous blood loss. I am one of the frequent visitors to the park, and I appreciate you for all the hard work you are doing to maintain the park, but on the same side, I saw few loopholes in the security of the park. Firstly, the short fence near the cages of wild animals. Secondly, the security crew should be present in each section of the park. I would like you to look into these problems immediately to avoid any further incidents. Regards, Mia