Writing Task 2: Responding to Survey Questions
Read the following information.
You are living in a developing country from where people are moving to developed countries. Local government department is conducting a survey to understand the problem. The department has sent out an opinion survey to see what residents feel about the given options
Brain drain Survey :
Option A: Rich countries are stealing professionals from poor countries
Option B: This is only part of the natural movement of professionals around the world.
To whom it may concern. It's also true that it is natural to have some movement of professionals between the countries. However, when it comes specifically to Brazil, I would say that rich countries are stealing our specialists. Unfortunately, we don't offer employment conditions capable of sounding more attractive than the ones offered by foreign countries. For example, the majority of the national positions doesn't provide life balance. Instead, the daily work journey is heavy as long as the salary is sadly low. The result is that professionals don't feel motivated to create a solid carrier under this scenario. Plus, they feel seduced by the chance to study a specialization program at an international institute. Brazilian post-graduation programs are costly, and most of our professionals can't afford to keep studying. Because of the reasons mentioned above, I firmly believe that the government should work on initiatives to increase onshore position's benefits and work in partnership with learning institutions to decrease the tuition for specific programs. By taking those measurements, hopefully, our specialized workforce will prefer to stay in our growing country. Regards, Tony