Writing Task 2: Responding to Survey Questions

Read the following information.

A local newspaper is conducting a survey to know whether their paper should have more news or more discounts and offers

Local News Paper Survey:

Option A: Your newspaper should have more Local and International news, then discount coupons, etc.
Option B: You think you can access news online but you need more Discount coupons and offers section.

To whom it may concern, I think news pages should have more Local and International news than discount coupons. Even challenging discount codes help people get the best deals on items. The problem with newspapers having more discount codes is that it takes away from publishing a newspaper. Most people in our community are senior citizens and are so used to the idea of getting their news from the paper. For example, my grandpa loves his Sunday walks to the newspaper stand to get a paper. Another issue with having more discount codes in the newspaper is it's unnecessary. Discount codes are already offered separately from the papers and can even be found at the entrance of stores like shopper's drug mart when I was in high school and used to package and distribute papers. Also, there were many discount codes from other stores we had to deliver alongside the newspapers, and these are the same ones you find at the stores. Considering these reasons, I believe it is better to have local and international news because most people enjoy it. Thank you for giving me a chance to provide input on this issue. Regards Thomas

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