Writing Task 2: Responding to Survey Questions
Read the following information.
Hostel management has decided to upgrade the security in and around the campus. The management has sent out an opinion survey to see what residents would like to have as new security measure.
You are residing in a College hostel :
Option A: New HD Night Vision Cameras covering the area around the hostel.
Option B: Installing biometric locks on the doors.
To whom it may concern. I think that having biometric locks would be a better choice. Even though HD Night vision Cameras have some advantages to enhance security, biometric locks can have more practical benefits to the hostel's security. The first and foremost reason is that the campus is located downtown, near the many bars. Many addicted persons around the campus can be dangerous to the security of students. For example, I just saw that one of them came to the hostel's yard last night. So, biometric locks can prevent the entrance for them. The second reason is that this hostel is dedicated to graduated students who need more concentration to work on their projects. But it is widespread for undergraduate students to come here to use facilities such as the library and gym. Considering these reasons, I believe that biometric locks would be a superior choice. It can prevent the people who are dangerous to the students and keep the hostel calm by avoiding the unwanted people in the hostel. Thank you for giving me a chance to provide input on this issue. Regards, Mark