Writing Task 1: Writing an Email

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Recently you visited the Zoological park and had an uncanny experience, as a man died by falling in the tiger’s enclosure. You were not able to do anything at that point but wanted to show your concern for the safety of the visitors.

Write an email to the Director of the Zoological Park in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things:

  • Give a description of the incident
  • Complain about the short fencing
  • Show your concern for the safety of the visitors

Hello, I hope you're doing well, Due to insecure fencing and lack of security lead to a person died in the zoo. Firstly, On April 21st, 2021, on my birthday, my family and I planned to visit the zoo after a long time. In Hyderabad, India, Nehru zoo is located in Asia which consists of various animals from all over the world. During our visit, we plan to see the whole zoo on cycle. In the middle of our visit, a young person aged 22yrs died due to short height fencing and lack of security during rush hours. According to government standards, every zoo should have minimum security for the public. We have already noticed on the same day, but the management did not notice it. Moreover, poor management causes a person to die by entering the tiger place. We tried to help the person, but it did not happen. I am requesting you to place a guard at every location to eliminate this kind of incident in the future. In conclusion, carelessness and insufficient security, a person died because of a tiger. Regards, Tony