Writing Task 2: Responding to Survey Questions

Read the following information.

A local school is planning to ban junk food on the campus which management thinks is the main reason deteriorating the health of the students. The school has sent out an opinion survey to see what family members think about the issue.

Junk food in School :

Option A: Should partially ban Junk food.
Option B: Should introduce healthy junk food alternatives.

Dear Campus Manager, I want to appreciate the school is taking steps to revisit the campus food. I believe education places should not encourage children to eat unhealthy food. I would like to share the reasons to substantiate my opinion. To start with, kids do not have their parents around them to ensure what they are eating is healthy. Being a working woman, I am not able to make lunch for school, and my kids buy food from the canteen. For sure, if they have the option to purchase pizza, they will not buy a vegetable soup or fruit box. If school stops selling such things, then they do not have any other choice but healthy food. Also, the junk comes with lots of artificial flavours and other chemicals which directly impacting their physical and mental growth. In last month City magazine publishes research finding that 48% of kids are suffering from high blood pressure, overweight and low eyesight; the main reason is the deficiency of vitamins, carbohydrates, and minerals. By discontinuing the sale of processed food, you are helping the student to overcome such problems and have healthy meals, which include meat, fish, vegetables, and milk. Having all the arguments, I think schools should ban the frozen and over precede food and provide and nutritious food. Regards, Mia

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